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Ben Wakeman's avatar

I love a small town scandal. The Phyllis/Trey relationship is pitch perfect. Everyone seen that dynamic before. But Winston, poor Winston had to die. He was Chekov’s gun. Great story, Stephanie.

Stephanie Sweeney's avatar

Thank you, Ben! I loved writing the Phyllis/Trey bits. Such a fun relationship to play with.

Thomas Foydel's avatar

Hey, that was alright! I enjoyed it. I will think of Winston many times in the near future. "Oh Winston."

Stephanie Sweeney's avatar

Thank you, Thomas! So glad you enjoyed it. Winston lives on in our thoughts.

Evan Miller's avatar

I like the slow descent this story towards the end. Hard to nail that parachute pacing, but you don't really well here. #poorwinston

Stephanie Sweeney's avatar

Thank you, Evan! Hadn’t seen that term parachute pacing before but I like it.

Evan Miller's avatar

Yeah just came up with that, but I'm going to use it more often now. Definitely works for your story though.